The big note coming out of last week was that the camera was too far away. So I pulled in the camera fairly dramatically - however, that meant that my little running guy was out of frame for most of the beginning frames. Since I need at least 100 frames of animation for the assignment, my wife Heather had the idea to add a second person in the elevator. It was a lot of fun to have some conflict added to the shot and play with the personality of the new guy.
One other change that might not be noticeable at first - the set is about half the size it was last week. Once I added the second guy (and added elevator buttons) I realized the doors were about 12 feet high. With their smaller scale and the camera pull in, they look almost the same.
Before the suggestion of adding the second guy, I had just planned on doing a camera move to pan across and follow the run (therefore keeping the 100 frames of animation). I'm posting that video too, just because I really liked the dynamic the camera pan gave.